Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 11


I read through a relatively excitement-filled chapter 11 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Margaux's browsing a fashion magazine is interrupted by explosions.  Henry steps into danger furiously.  Leonid proves to be somewhat useful with glass grenades and "cylinders."  I attempt to explain what magazine a woman might read while trying not to sound misogynistic. Discussion questions close out our fun, exciting episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 20.64MB - Duration: 36:39 m (79 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!