Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Homecoming Chapter 8


I babble a bit before and after I read chapter 8 of Homecoming, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes arrive at a storybook castle that is apparently owned by Dracula's wardrobe coordinator.  Margaux snaps at the help like true nobility would.  Henry suggests they get drunk on wine and lose their security deposit.  I badmouth my email provider because of a pen.  Discussion questions end our exciting episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 17.98MB - Duration: 33:38 m (75 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!