Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 22


I eventually start reading chapter 22 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Henry and Margaux casually interrogate bad guys covered in furniture parts.  Some additional minor characters with names make cameos.  Henry casually destroys a priceless artifact without considering the consequences.  I lament how terrible one unreadable book was and somehow manage to corner my lovely wife into appearing next week on the podcast.  Discussion questions, including a bonus question, close out an episode that contains far too much babbling.



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!