Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 18


I stumble through chapter 18 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Our heroes attend yet another staff meeting and once again fail to use any magic.  Henry receives some bad news that is relatively ambiguous to the reader.  Margaux returns to her outdoor desk for lunch.  I wonder if perhaps I'm being too explicitly negative about the quality of this book.  Discussion questions close out our fortieth episode!



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Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!