Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Offworlder Chapter 14


I diverge from the story repeatedly as I read Chapter 14 of Offworlder, a book I wrote in a month.  Shirtless Henry gets woken up to do battle with raiders.  Janey sleeps through a five hour carriage ride.  A supposedly vicious fighter starts weeping.  I lament the vague descriptions of magic in this book and wonder if lamb is a socially acceptable meat.  Discussion questions wrap up a drinking-break-filled episode!



Filetype: MP3 - Size: 23.97MB - Duration: 52:49 m (63 kbps 44100 Hz)

Want to follow along?

Offworlder and Bringing Balance are both available on Amazon as  actual printed books or an eBooks for your Amazon Kindle:

Offworlder on Amazon

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  All versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!