Let's explore a book written in a month together!

Once upon a time, Jeff wrote a book in one month. Now he plans to read it, chapter by chapter with commentary, for everyone to enjoy! He'll critique spelling and typos, identify gaping plot holes, and ridicule the awkward dialog he incorporated into this work of literature. Come along for the exciting journey into a fantasy world riddled with grammar errors!

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Chapter 8


I read another chapter of Bringing Balance that's full of either foreshadowing or poor writing.  Our heros relax on sofas that are almost certainly magical.  Margaux's love of shoes leads to awkwardness.  I have trouble emptying a can of beer.  Discussion questions follow!



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Bringing Balance is available on Amazon as an actual printed book or an eBook for your Amazon Kindle:

Bringing Balance on Amazon

Don't worry!  Both versions have all the typos, spelling errors, and sentence fragments one would expect from a hastily written book!